Coming home again comments

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CH1- Written
CH2- In Progress
CH3- planned
CH4- planned
CH5- I know I am going to write something

What? if you are asking how the characters are, they are pretyy good I guess, I have no clue what you are asking.

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I like the story, just keep updating it, lol. The part in cavestory where you fight the giant machine is HARD. lol, I have a snake gun, the bubble gun, and a sword, I think I will restart, lol.

Okay, I have a quick question about the latest update. I get the feeling that this is one of those like sleeping, or knocked out moments where the character is kind of internally speaking with himself, and another figure, or something like one (I.E. another voice than the characters) Is answering things he's asking and such. Is that what's going on?

You have the gist of it. The character asks the questions, and then finds the answers because he realizes that the question exists.

Something I want to know is how long the "many eternities" is. I assume it's something like people not receiving enough drugs during surgery so that they're conscious, but with cryo instead.

People don't wait that long with nothing to do. There are *books* about people who can't move.

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Anyway, it looks very interesting. Good luck hiding, Vek.

Thank you debtmaster, youve stirred me out of my lazieness and I am making headway

Wow, I have to admit the latest installment here has me pleasantly captivated. Just like every other time you've posted on this story, I hate it, not because it's bad, but because there's never enough. I can honestly say that if you keep going with this, I would love to own the novel in the future. xD

::Edit:: I read the last installment, and again I want more. The last couple sentences beg for more. I've read it a few times now, and it's still rather confusing. More please, I want elaboration xD

yah, at this point,, it is supposed to be confusing, because the main character is confused and you share his viewpoint.

Dude, I just read coming home again. Nice work. Fast-paced and captivating.

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Life’s a journey. Shame about the destination.
- Argun Slyter, ‘Well What Did You Expect?,’ Act 2 Scene 2

Really good. I noticed a major rip-off from Star-Wars ( furry people with lots of streghnth) But besides that this is really good. When you say people say things, do more than -ex- Jack said, or Jack spoke, do like Jack stuttered, Jack moaned, Jack uttered, just use some other words. Besides that, This story is amazing, so write more cause I want to finish the story. you have 3 weeks.