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Ethanthecrazy
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PostSubject: Coming home again comments   Thu Feb 28, 2008 6:01 pm

Leave your comments here, your comments at the acutal story will be deleted at the start of each chapter.


CH1- Written
CH2- In Progress
CH3- planned
CH4- planned
CH5- I know I am going to write something

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Sat Mar 01, 2008 9:07 am

What? if you are asking how the characters are, they are pretyy good I guess, I have no clue what you are asking.

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Sat Mar 01, 2008 10:31 am

Just put any comments you would like to make.
Post anything about the story.

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Sat Mar 01, 2008 11:44 am

I like the story, just keep updating it, lol. The part in cavestory where you fight the giant machine is HARD. lol, I have a snake gun, the bubble gun, and a sword, I think I will restart, lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Wed Jun 18, 2008 11:54 pm

Okay, I have a quick question about the latest update. I get the feeling that this is one of those like sleeping, or knocked out moments where the character is kind of internally speaking with himself, and another figure, or something like one (I.E. another voice than the characters) Is answering things he's asking and such. Is that what's going on?

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Thu Jun 19, 2008 3:28 pm

You have the gist of it. The character asks the questions, and then finds the answers because he realizes that the question exists.

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:14 pm

Something I want to know is how long the "many eternities" is. I assume it's something like people not receiving enough drugs during surgery so that they're conscious, but with cryo instead.

People don't wait that long with nothing to do. There are *books* about people who can't move.

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Anyway, it looks very interesting. Good luck hiding, Vek.
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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Sat Jun 21, 2008 2:17 am

Thank you debtmaster, youve stirred me out of my lazieness and I am making headway

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Mon Nov 03, 2008 6:34 pm

Wow, I have to admit the latest installment here has me pleasantly captivated. Just like every other time you've posted on this story, I hate it, not because it's bad, but because there's never enough. I can honestly say that if you keep going with this, I would love to own the novel in the future. xD

::Edit:: I read the last installment, and again I want more. The last couple sentences beg for more. I've read it a few times now, and it's still rather confusing. More please, I want elaboration xD

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Tue Nov 04, 2008 7:26 pm

yah, at this point,, it is supposed to be confusing, because the main character is confused and you share his viewpoint.

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:31 pm

Dude, I just read coming home again. Nice work. Fast-paced and captivating.

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PostSubject: Re: Coming home again comments   Sun Nov 16, 2008 1:22 am

Really good. I noticed a major rip-off from Star-Wars ( furry people with lots of streghnth) But besides that this is really good. When you say people say things, do more than -ex- Jack said, or Jack spoke, do like Jack stuttered, Jack moaned, Jack uttered, just use some other words. Besides that, This story is amazing, so write more cause I want to finish the story. you have 3 weeks.

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