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Mr. Serious
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PostSubject: Fan-Fiction WH40k Comments   Fan-Fiction WH40k  Comments EmptyThu Nov 06, 2008 9:17 pm

As you have guessed. This will be the new place to place yer comments on my fan-fiction. Please comment, as it is what spurs me on to write.

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PostSubject: Re: Fan-Fiction WH40k Comments   Fan-Fiction WH40k  Comments EmptyThu Nov 06, 2008 10:08 pm

FIRST COMMENT!

Honestly, I don't have much to critique you about. You writing has energy and a certain level of "awesome" about it.

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PostSubject: Re: Fan-Fiction WH40k Comments   Fan-Fiction WH40k  Comments EmptyThu Jan 08, 2009 5:10 pm

Can someone please move the comments from my Fan-Fic to here instead of in my story Spot?

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PostSubject: Re: Fan-Fiction WH40k Comments   Fan-Fiction WH40k  Comments EmptyWed Jan 14, 2009 9:04 pm

Great. I noticed some inconsistancies in style, but that will solve its self as you develope as a writer. Definitaly entertaining and worth a read.

4/5?

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