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Ethanthecrazy
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PostSubject: In the Darkness   In the Darkness EmptyWed Apr 02, 2008 1:20 am

In the Darkness
The Asylum



Darkness, oh what an analogy
We fear it only because our eyes can'not see
what it cloaks in shadow, hiding from light
and we fear to go seeking unless it is bright

You move around it, over, under, but not through
Unless you have a light to guide you to
Your destination, on the other side
Never to linger, to see what can hide
In a pitch black pit
With no light to see by

The glorious darkness kept at bay
by the light of a single candle
Humans, are weak, you fear to stay
where darkness hides the handle
to the door. . .
In a pitch black pit
With no light to see by

I sit on the other side of that door
The only one brave enough to stay
And if you see this you are worthy for more
so let me show you the way
to the door . . .
In a pitch black pit
With no light to see by

Follow me to the other side.

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PostSubject: Re: In the Darkness   In the Darkness EmptyWed Apr 02, 2008 9:25 am

I like it. It draws an interesting outlook on darkness, and what it does to us in terms of emotion. Somehow it brings an interesting turn of mood, and was just overall well done.

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Ethanthecrazy
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PostSubject: Re: In the Darkness   In the Darkness EmptyWed Apr 02, 2008 6:22 pm

*clap* *clap* *clap*

Thx

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PostSubject: Re: In the Darkness   In the Darkness EmptySun Apr 06, 2008 6:06 pm

Ya, I liked it.

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