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PostSubject: My shakespearean sonnet.   Sat Mar 22, 2008 12:51 am

You nkow oddly enough I found it rather easy to write this, and it made writing rather happy rather easy. It follows all the rules of a shakespearean sonnet. Iambic pentameter (Ten syllables per line) Three quatrains following and alternating rhyme scheme to make a unit, and then a rhyming couplet summing up the entire poem.



Darkness and pain smothering me inside,
Ripping me up , tearing me down, torture.
It seems like there is no turn to this tide,
I canít keep going of that I am sure.
Then from nowhere a light upon this path,
Guiding me away from all the darkness.
Abolishing all of the pains dark wrath,
Pulling me away from my dark abyss.
Now I hold your heart deep down in my soul,
And promise to forever hold it dear.
With love and care in tender sweet embrace,
All I ask is for you to please stay near.
My dear friend I promise to cherish you,
Wishing you could somehow cherish me too.

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PostSubject: Re: My shakespearean sonnet.   Sat Mar 22, 2008 5:33 pm

That was good, I liked it.

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PostSubject: Re: My shakespearean sonnet.   Sat Mar 22, 2008 5:44 pm

Lol, cool. It's not too bad for my first try at this form of poetry.

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PostSubject: Re: My shakespearean sonnet.   Fri Mar 28, 2008 2:45 pm

well done, standing ovation, except then the laptop woulf fall on th floor

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PostSubject: Re: My shakespearean sonnet.   Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:12 am

Lol, thank you, I'm glad it's liked. I kind of want to write another, not sure yet...

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